My Emotions My Thoughts Poem by ramesh rai

My Emotions My Thoughts

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I reconcile my all emotions
to entwine my thought
to make it more softening
that can penetrate all dirts
like the soft water more liable
to wash out all dirts, and bring
freshness and colors.

My all emotions are stand still
it has no wave
no current, no desire
to touch the shore.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tirupathi Chandrupatla 27 December 2013

Some softness is needed to wash the dirt. Nice meaning. Thank you.

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Hazel Durham 22 December 2013

Delightful write about your feelings so deep to soften and wash out the dirt and to be left with bright and fresh colours, highlights of living!

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