ramesh rai

Gold Star - 18,253 Points (13.12.1955 / howrah)

My Emotions My Thoughts - Poem by ramesh rai

I reconcile my all emotions
to entwine my thought
to make it more softening
that can penetrate all dirts
like the soft water more liable
to wash out all dirts, and bring
freshness and colors.

My all emotions are stand still
it has no wave
no current, no desire
to touch the shore.


Comments about My Emotions My Thoughts by ramesh rai

  • Gold Star - 8,933 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (12/27/2013 2:46:00 AM)

    Some softness is needed to wash the dirt. Nice meaning. Thank you. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 8,632 Points Hazel Durham (12/22/2013 9:28:00 AM)

    Delightful write about your feelings so deep to soften and wash out the dirt and to be left with bright and fresh colours, highlights of living! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, December 20, 2013



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