My Extraordiarily Ordinary Woman Poem by Allan James Saywell

My Extraordiarily Ordinary Woman



She could have been the perfect Woman
If only for her insensibility
Which caused a certain amount
Of cold blooded behaviour
Her moist eyes hid her coldness
Her callous heart of stone
Hid her marble deadness
She woke every morning
As if waking from a coma
She had the hide of a Rhino
Did'nt give a strawberry for me
I loved her
She was to me
What Adams rib was to Eve

Thursday, September 24, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lyn Paul 25 September 2015

She could have been the perfect woman Hope it didn't take too long to find out. A great description of something lost yet perhaps never found. Life certainly is like a box of chocolates. Thank You

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Kelly Kurt 24 September 2015

A wonderfully original poem, Allan. Thanks

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