My Feeling Was My Sin... Poem by tabandeh heidary bafghy

My Feeling Was My Sin...



No one understood me
i was there
i was there with them
but not seen
like pure silence
like an aimless kit
i was full of wishes a day
freedom
breathing in fresh air
flying in sky with my feeling
you know? my feeling
my feeling was my sin
my wishes gone
now
i am here
i am here without them
and like an empty glass
you know?
my wishes gone

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
James Mclain 28 June 2013

It will take a long time. To get over what was done to them. I am sorry my friend in life. Not yet in death, you have to go on again.....iip

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Kelly Seale 27 June 2013

But you still have your feelings.. you still have your words... and with those two combined, You can change the world. tabandeh, this is a Superb piece, Great Ink! ; - Kelly.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 27 June 2013

Poignant but fine poem. Nice to meet u. I hope u read mine too.

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Vishal Sharma 26 June 2013

so sad dear friend in our life something unusual happened we lost our identity the toughest time then to tolrate the situation

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Unwritten Soul 26 June 2013

Well i dont know anyone here and in my life that live their days without do mistakes, and away from sin...we maybe have sin, but then we learn and ask God for forgiveness, try always be be the best...Dont you forget that He is the Most forgiving? thus dont surrender for uncertainties just believe that there will be another story and He will guide you_Soul

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