(my Flame) Burning From The Inside Out Poem by Scarlet .....
(my Flame) Burning From The Inside Out
My flame from
within
My flame of
darkness
Flame of
anger
this flame is
my beast
It rages within me
higher and higher
it burns
I really need
to put this
flame out
for it has
already almost
taken my life
how do you
put a flame
out that is receiving
constant fuel
I know the flame
will never totally
be put out
Can I not
get it to
burn lower
for it is
so high now
That it is
once again
close to that
point of
serious harm
I need to be able
to lower it
to a level where
it causes no
harm
I need to have it
under total
control
for in this
manner
I can so
survive
I learn to
control
this flame
I learn to
control
the fuel
I need to use fuel
in a positive way
before it reaches the
flame
I need to be able
to release the fuel
without it touching
the flame
I so say
Flame of anger this flame is my beast.................... still it would inflame time again flame when begets flame by the genesis, ingenious write by the imagery,10+, thanks for sharing
i like this poem. but i hope that the flame goes all the way down.
Tie your demon down, that's what I do. Sometimes they come in handy. Nice writing.
What were you angry about-disappointments-we all have those or just misunderstanding your soul's dark side.pretty good this can keep one guessing for a long time to come.A ten from me.
Poetry is one way to flush out your frustration, you have done it wonderfully through this poem.
This is a really good poem! I love it! You are really talented!
Very fine poem! I wonder if it wouldn't be even better if you shorten it just a bit? I think... and it' s only my opinion! ... that the last two stanzas could be cut completely. But maybe you had a strong reason for putting them there!
Nicely done. Passion of anger and the pain that goes with it. Great poem.
anger...wonderfully expressed...excellent...10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/19/2024 6:37:44 AM # 1.0.0.1119
IT NICE TO SHARE WITH PEOPLE YOUR PAIN IN ORDER TO ELIMINATE IT. GREAT JOB DOING SO BUT I HOPE YOUR HEART`S FLAME IS PUT OFF NOW.