My Form Is Like The World Poem by ms. carrot

My Form Is Like The World

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My form is like the world

Filled with different emotions

A form filled with war that is triggered by feelings

It's a darkness filled with hating desires

The darkness overpowers the good

The darkness becomes the good

The good is hidden within

Desires that brings sorrow

Desires that bring hate

Desires that bring tears

When man grows is only then he understands

The good that was always hidden inside

Begging to be noticed

Friday, November 14, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: feelings
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 05 December 2014

The gradually passage from boyhood to adulthood makes an individual much more aware of the interrelatedness of reality. Consequently the good hidden inside begins to seek notice and recognition. A nice piece of poetry, do keep it up and thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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