My Great Lover Poem by Jhadeswar Khanda

My Great Lover

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My lover went to the bar,
Took me with his own car.
I sat near his sit,
He opened my little skirt.
I was happy, hearing my cry-up,
He held my waist and kissed my top.
He drunk my juice with more cheerful,
Don't be abandoned, I am a wine bottle.

Friday, October 9, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 09 October 2015

A wine bottle of love. Nice work.

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Jhadeswar Khanda 30 October 2015

thanks

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