Happy Place

My Honest Love - Poem by Happy Place

he may not have the look that you dreamed of
but he is still beautiful
he may not be as successful as you think of
but he still try to make things better
he may not be as funny as you want him to be
but he still wants to make you laugh
he may not be good with words as you might like him to be
but he still work on saying the right thing to make you feel alright
he may not show you his worrisome 
but he still text you asking how you are
he may not have a grand gesture to woe you off
but he still try in his unique way to please you
he may go silo completely
but he still make sure you have what you need
above all, he loves you
he cares for you
he try to understand you
he wants to make you happy
he wants to shelter you
at all time
to ensure on your well being
so love him as honest as you can be

Topic(s) of this poem: love

Comments about My Honest Love by Happy Place

  • Gold Star - 16,861 Points John Westlake (5/2/2014 8:43:00 PM)

    This is how love should be. The person may not be perfect for everyone else, but if he or she is perfect for you that is what matters. I pray that you will find that person and you enjoy your lives together (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 50 Points Happy Place (4/5/2014 2:59:00 AM)

    Thanks! Probably my unrequited love but hey, one of these days, I might get what I asked for. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 45 Points Colleen Courtney (4/4/2014 11:36:00 PM)

    Very nice write. What love should really be about! Good job! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, April 4, 2014

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