My Life Poem by Bleeding Heart

My Life

Rating: 5.0


Two shots of hate from a mouth as loud as a gun,
like an assassin... who does it for fun.

Two deafening blows in a war that has just begun,
life gone away...I'm done.

Two red roses sitting on my coffin, the wind blows,
leaving only one
The world I know disappears...like the setting sun.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lisa Bray 14 November 2008

wow, i realy loved your poem i could see a pic in my head of what you where saying i could feel and here what was going around good job ill give u a 10++

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