</>I make a mistake often and I guess you do too,
I start believing me and my life are one instead of two.
And that I am an assortment of moments and nothing more,
What I am now is the result of what happened before.
Even while judging others sometimes i only see,
Their past, present or how their life's going to be.
And when my life is going on fruitlessly,
I forget that I still have me.
But in moments of epiphany I feel there is more to me,
Than what time has shaped my life to be.
And though I have nothing to hide,
My life doesn't always reflect what I have inside.
I love my life I am not suicidal,
Dont get me wrong,
But i love myself more for I am eternal,
My life isn't that long.
So to make my life worthy of me I shall continually try,
Because ultimately that is what others will judge me by.
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Whao! This is simply amazing, beautifuly expressed and wel written
Whao! This simply amazing, .beautifuly expressed and wel written, .thumps up
Very nice i am surprised i am the first to comment about this poem it is very creative and emotional i wish you would continue to write more poems you are very good and best of luck
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I like it. simple and deep!