My Love Poem by Sandhya S.N

My Love

Rating: 4.9


I feel that feeble gradient heart
Loving, caring and chilling
Oh! I feel its warmth and cold and
Virile visage with vivid smile
Evermore extol his traits
Yen me towards and unto him
Oh I can’t bear further
Unto death without his love
Roaring mist are his words
Arching life and life flashes
Meant to enlighten men and
Impulse impel to implant love

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ency Bearis 18 July 2009

sweet words...such so passionate....beautiful poem....10

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Ted M 19 July 2009

Such beautiful words, declaring your situation......10+++

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Siddharth Singh 19 July 2009

Being drawn to your love helplessly. Great work. Give you a 9.

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a passionate flow of words inthis poem...lovely

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Vijay Menon 23 July 2009

nice poem well written10+++

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Surya . 01 August 2009

vow! beautiful and raring to go. i love your spirit. voted 10 surya

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Jt Jayasingh 29 July 2009

what a feminine touch. what a real passion for life. simple straight words from the heart. regards J T Jayasingh

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Zachary Clark 28 July 2009

This is a easy free flowing poem expressing the pull of loved ones in destiny. Time pushing along the make meetings destiny. Beautiful!

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Nikunj Sharma 27 July 2009

Free flowing poem like a young river....it tells the readers what love can be all about. Good one

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Sarwar Chowdhury 27 July 2009

'Impulse impel to implant love' excellent! ! ! fine words chosen! lovely eloquence! 10++

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Sandhya S.N

Sandhya S.N

Thiruvananthapuram, Kerala, India
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