Feel that! feel, with your heart
The feel! The passion of real love
Don’t long for those words to sound;
It may sometimes swap away
Away by storm and hurl it hard
And wither away in nasty wind
Don’t long for those written words;
It may sometimes get wash away
Away by rain to abate it’s bold
And fade away in sea ripples
But, hear! Here from my heart
The feel! The passion of my love
Which I kept hidden from the sun
The rain and the vicious wild storm
Sandhya
hidden love published in ph........... no more someone can hide that......best write see my 10> above.......
sandhya, mookaanuragam ennathu hridayathinullile oru karamullaanu.....
beautiful.. the precious love hidden from sun and and... inviting to hear.. but not easy to hear.. but we can feel it... with heart... passion of real love.. sandhya.. well done..-Jaleel
Nice poem.hearts feelings does not sound but can one feel.you said it.will you read my poem 'naked souls'and comment.
Nice poem.hearts feelings does not sound but can one feel.you said it.will you read my poem 'naked souls'and comment.
But, hear! Here from my heart The feel! The passion of my love Which I kept hidden from the sun The rain and the vicious wild storm The passion of love that you had hidden till now.. nice poem. full of passion
But, hear! Hear from my heart The feel! The passion of my love ****** can sense strong feelings and passion, very original............10+++
Love may not be expressable sometimes when the situations and circumstances may make the outward words spoken or written seem harsh. But, true love will find its own - When felt by another loving heart - feelings never betray us as may words. Well expressed and well conveyed in the constructing inhospitable conditions and the true passion of love passionately felt and written too! Angel
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
what i enjoyed here is the message of hidden love is portrayed metaphorically and with simplicity, a nice write