Ethan Ying


My Love for You


My Love for you
Is far beyond description.

You draw me towards you.
Your smile, your attitude,
Your flowing, long tresses,
And your caring nature.

You are a great musician,
You are a caring girl.
You are not only beautiful,
But you have a large, expanding heart.

Submitted: Wednesday, September 25, 2013
Edited: Friday, September 27, 2013

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This poem is dedicated to someone I have a slight crush on. She doesn't, I believe, know that I like her.

Comments about this poem (My Love for You by Ethan Ying )

  • Gold Star - 9,723 Points Heather Wilkins (10/8/2013 7:38:00 PM)

    good work Ethan. A sweet poem for a dear girl friend. love the read (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,252 Points Sekharan Pookkat (9/26/2013 9:23:00 AM)

    you have a large expanding heart- I liked it (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 231 Points Beach Girl (9/26/2013 6:53:00 AM)

    Very lovely poem Ethan! Beautiful words for a beautiful and sweet girl. I think I know who she is. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,921 Points Khairul Ahsan (9/25/2013 11:08:00 PM)

    Wow! What a nice poem to begin with! Is this your first? It's lovely and I give you 10/10 for this.
    Very pure and pristine expression of love, I liked it very much.
    If you can write so well, I am sure very soon she will come to know about your crush on her. Just go ahead!
    Thanks for sharing your privacy through the note. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 17 Points Abhishek Mishra (9/25/2013 9:48:00 PM)

    Nice poem dear...go ahead: -) (Report) Reply

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