My Love For You Poem by Saroj Padhi

My Love For You

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My love for you
alternates like a dark cloud
between the Sun and rain,
its fringe lightened by rays
but center seething in futile pain;

to find a voice thro thunder
a pounding heart to lighten,
waiting for a meaningful lightning
sparks in your flinty heart to awaken;

but Time is cloaked in
misty drizzles of uncertainty
without the power or desire
to rake up new embers in vein;

my love for you sleeps like
the mythical giant Kumbhakarna
in eternal wait for the right moment
to slay the monkeys of desires mundane;

my love for you lives like a sage
on the cloud-kissed mountain
to touch clouds floating over its head
and for the rays slowly to brighten.

My Love For You
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Venkat Easwaran 30 April 2023

Great poem piece. Rarely I get such good poems to read here. A meaningful metaphor you employ. A great eloquent piece in dedication to Mahatma Gandhi

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" my love for you…. touch(es) clouds floating over its head" beautiful ode to the Mahatma. Thank you for sharing… top

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Dr Dillip K Swain 29 April 2023

my love for you lives like a sage...I liked this but not...'my love for you sleeps like the mythical giant Kumbhakarna'

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