If my love made you become more
Beautiful for a second,
There would be a sign of the existence of our true love,
And for the existence of The Lord in Heaven.
And if you were not beautiful any longer,
It would mean that God would still love us,
He would still be on His throne in Heaven,
But you would be no longer in my dreams,
Those dreams with visions of happiness and love.
You would see me mourning my love for you,
And I would see those irreversible changes.....
Poem by Marieta Maglas
Wow, i love this poem. I love how you tell it like it is and so artfully creative. Thank you for sharing, a def 10+++++ :)
Dear Marieta yes i read a few poems...nice ones. I liked this one...its beautiful Chhavi anupam
MARI - You and I are old enough to know that 'BEING IN LOVE' always makes one more beautiful - not only to the object of one's love - but to everyone. When we are truely in love we Glow - just like Moses did when he came down from Sianai with the 10 Commandments. 'His face shone like the face of an Angel'. GOD IS LOVE - The face of Moses shone because he had been in touch with God on Sinai - through love we also touch God's Love and our enhanced beauty is proof of both the existence of 'Our True Love' and 'God'. Love between two humans has to be Spiritual (Imgo Dei) to really be 'True Love'. I empathise with the truth in Verse One - Mari - because it is experiential. Verse Two contrasts the ETERNAL with the EPHEMERAL 'God is still on the Throne of Heaven' but your Lover is no longer 'On the Throne of your Heart'. 'You would see me mourning my love for you' The last line frightens me - Mary - so I won't repeat it - except to say that if Love is True then it is also Eternal in symbiosis with God's Eternal Throne in Heaven. Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem with us. Love you in Poetry - JOHN.
‘…And you can see me mourning my love for you…’ Yeah…its Divine Mourning …makes love minus mortality…sometime thro' separation than union Ten++ Ms. Nivedita UK
From: Theresa Walker (United States ;) To: Marieta Maglas Date Time: 12/17/2009 2: 35: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: Hey God Bless You I dont quite understand Latrina Time so could you explain what that poem means. I really like the following poems they are very nice Letter To Jesus, and My Love For You.So feel free to send me a message anytime asking me to view your poems or just to say hello. BE BLESS LOVE YA
Marieta Maglas (10/20/2009 2: 43: 00 PM) | Delete this message From: Dona Lil Antonio (Manila Philippines; Female; 29) To: Marieta Maglas Date Time: 10/19/2009 12: 19: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: hi ive gone through your poems they were all awesome and written in deep feelings. keep writing and keep inspiring others to make good crafts as well.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
i like it but how love can be such a freak! !