Treasure Island

Nametso Degratia Mooketsi

(03 October / Mafikeng, North West)

My Love Story


Rain falls, wind blows
The sun shines,
As I travel miles and miles just to see you,
Passing through storms yet with a smile.........just for you.

It all comes naturally,
Just like loving you.

My eyes reacted, my feelings got affected
I got attracted, as my eyes dilated while you patiently waited,
I began to think about the multitude that were ommited
Just so I could be selected,

My mind almost concluded what was beyond my understanding's comprehension,
My heart palpitated at the mention of the powerful word ''love''
I solemnly couldn't abbreviate nor bring to understanding the happenings of that moment...........

As you told me you love me, I aborted the negative insane mentalities past relationships have piled up at my doorstep,
As I gazed through your eyes attentively and saw a flame of love,
A flame that scorched through my inner soul
Lighting a way through to your heart.

Your intense love touched my lonely heart & left prints on it,
I focused more on the future, but you teach me to enjoy the present moment for it can not be regained
I love you explicitly, a love of infinite possibilities,
Loving you is to wander away into the most exciting intricacies of thought…
It is to lose myself and find myself in you...! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Submitted: Tuesday, September 10, 2013
Edited: Wednesday, September 11, 2013
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This poem was written when I was all alone. Didn't have a boy friend at the time, many came and left, but now I have found the person to dedicate it to, someone who values honesty, love...etc, someone who didn't try to impress me with his pocket but rather someone who shows me everyday that they love me explicitly.

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