My Newest Poem.... Poem by Sylvia Frances Chan

My Newest Poem....

Rating: 5.0


What If the sun does not always rise every morn?
What If you always get that scorn?
What If the love you have got, and you are so fond of, one day just fades,
what If this love is only the imaginations of your shades?

So my dear, never shed a tear, but be strong though things go wrong
never sit down and start to think,
but work on that problem instantly with your instinct
that's the only point in life you are assured
to get the quickest result of the problem
and you're instantly cured.

No one promised you a rose garden,
all of a sudden I remember Ali B, with his TV shot Yarden
Ali is the famous Dutch rapper, Yarden a place for cremation in a way
He did this TV commercial as respect for his dad who just passed sans delay

What If the love you have got, you are both fond of, one day just fades,
what If this love is only the imaginations of your shades….?



Photography and Painting by Sylvia Frances Chan: "The Sun in the Sky is Moving"


© Sylvia Frances Chan
Dutch Poetess

AD. Tuesday the 17th April 2018-
@ 3.54 hrs A.M. West-European Time

My Newest Poem....
Monday, April 16, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: love and dreams,love and loss,death
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
My Newest Poem Today, what would you say....?
Please, read and a small comment anyway,
I thank YOU in my particular way,
created and added with love,

Sylvia Frances Chan,
Dutch Poetess and Paintress
Evangelist and World Traveler

AD. Tuesday the 17th April 2018-
@ 3.54 hrs A.M. West-European Time
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 21 April 2018

If sun will not rise daily there will be darkness. If love will not be her n Earth this will turn in to a planet of sorrow. With dun love sun rises here and light is continuously sprinkled to replace darkness into light. No one has promised a rose garden but we can build a new rose garden by love to get peace. You have brilliant idea to express this magnificent poem....10

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Bernard F. Asuncion 17 April 2018

Dear Sylvia, such a heartfelt excellent poem👍👍👍

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Robert Murray Smith 16 April 2018

Sylvia, your poem should flow freely. Does it? I always point out in my comments about avoiding cliches in poetry.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 17 April 2018

Yes you are right Robert. I doubt whether this will flow freely now, I reckon. Thank you for your advice.

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