My Night And I Poem by Shouvik Roy

My Night And I

Rating: 5.0


Since long, I am colored yellow;
Hanging from the sun, I make a girl smile
And her black eyes remind me of night

For years I have been so busy,
I have been to places at the same time,
Here and there, grey and white,
I think I have lost myself
In her hope and her celebration

I hate when the Sun shines for long,
My tired eyes have always looked
For the lady who shines in black;
My head aches and I need her shoulder,
I weep bright
But yet she is nowhere to see

I have seen bleeding knees and wet eyes
And leaves going dry
And so I seek for my night
To make my sorrows blind

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I wrote this poem when a thought came into my mind, what is the probable relationship between day and night?
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

The romances and build-up from the first word till the last. Is very good, I admire this style of poetry, how I wish could be able, but nice work mate The_African_Son (Th³_ªfR¹cª¬_šºN)

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The romances and build-up from the first word till the last. Is very good, I admire this style of poetry, how I wish could be able, but nice work mate The_African_Son (Th³_ªfR¹cª¬_šºN)

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The romances and build-up from the first word till the last. Is very good, I admire this style of poetry, how I wish could be able, but nice work mate The_African_Son (Th³_ªfR¹cª¬_šºN)

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Kasia Fedyk 24 June 2012

Amazing! the lady in black her mystic hides all that the light see and for a moment I can rest there. Shouvik, your writing is simply soulful! ! ! I love it.

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