My Pain Poem by Makayla Straight

My Pain

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Everywhere I go there is Pain. Everything I touch goes all to hell. It's like pain follows me around. It's stalking every move I do. Lord I know you don't hate but why must you dislike me so much? I look around and all I see is pain. Is there even happieness on Earth that I cannot distroy? Can pain really go away? When I am happy pain is in the background, making me suffer, by threating to come out.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

i love how you pour out your heart into your poems. and this is a great example of it..amazing lines wow im captivated =)

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Christopher Lee 04 May 2009

there is a story by Chinmayananda the post and the ghost at night the post would look like a ghost same upon throwing light becomes post so it is a question of perception the optimist consider situations that are adverse as challenges life is about tackling challenges rather than enjoying a comfortable ready-made life hope Makayla agrees with me...God bless you

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Richard Dates 01 May 2009

Life as a teenager can be tough. Kids can be mean. Parents can be difficult to understand. Teachers can be insensitive. Hang in there!

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Ashraful Musaddeq 01 May 2009

It is painful state of pain. Nicely composed.

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WOW your really good but pain can be destroyed by love

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Makayla Straight

Makayla Straight

I was Born in Tuscon Then I moved to Phoenix
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