My Pole Star Poem by Namita Rani Panda

My Pole Star

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When my sky is darkest deep
with no moon or stars to peep;
when I'm drained of all my hopes
asto progress there is no scope;
when to move forward I don't dare
as I feel like trapped in a snare;
when everyone at me growl and hound
and in the pool of despair I'm drowned;
when as a traveller in a dreary desert
with no oasis to quench my thirst;
constantly stir your inspiring words
you're my pole star my loving dad!

Sunday, August 9, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Prem Nizar Hameed 09 August 2020

Good composition. Enjoyed the read.

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Rajnish Manga 09 August 2020

An outstanding tribute from a grateful daughter to her loving dad. Beautifully articulated. Thanks for sharing. The sweetness and the depth of expression deserves highest appreciation. The poem goes to my favourite poem; s list.

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Varsha M 09 August 2020

Beautiful words of appreciation and inspirational. Well written poetry with essence.

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