My Requiem Poem by Usman Hanif

My Requiem



she said
'keep going on
i am a bit tired
i would join you soon'
and what if
she would be left behind
she'd have to fly to us...
really she flew...
she flew away from us
leaving the clay behind
nothing would have happened
sublime time, now she'd spend
and wait for our arrival...
there...

03-03-2008

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Waqas Naeem 06 December 2008

Quite a requiem! One for TRO i'd say.. lolz! I like the subtlety in this piece, the way the scene shifts...nicely done man...

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Malini Kadir 07 April 2008

I like the way you have began this....poetry...

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Samra Mahmood 01 April 2008

poem is good...keep up the gud work

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