My Sight ~ Poem by M. Asim Nehal

My Sight ~

Rating: 5.0


For the countless days,
I stood at the meadow
To see the vastness of the field
My sight returned to me with a smile.

For the countless nights,
I stood under the sky
To see the stars and galaxy
My sight returned with a glowing light.

For countless days and nights,
I stood and watched city
To see the life around
My sight returned with shame.

Now I fear to see the Village,
All barren land, no seed to sow
Eyes waiting for the clouds
My sight returns with mercy.

Friday, February 17, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: hope
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Wonderful. " My sight returns with mercy." When the entire world cries for mercy, only a poet's sight has it. Everywhere else, it has vanished. So very true about Poets and Poetry.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 17 February 2023

This was enjoyable and brilliant. It made me think Bravo! ! ! !

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Anjandev Roy 18 February 2023

Beautifully expressed.......thank u, dear friend.....

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Rajan Trajan Renganathan 18 February 2023

True to the situation. Well said MAN.

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Rob Lamberton 19 February 2023

O' what things we see and don't see! !

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 19 February 2023

The sight returns with the splendour of nature. Marvellous Poem Asim ji

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Gordon Walter 18 February 2023

I agree with Unni's comment/

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Deepak S S 18 February 2023

Nothing remains pure and untouched, except the purity of heart,

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Michael Jack 18 February 2023

Crafty poem, you nailed it with this wonderful poem, today's situation.

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