Just look at that sweet thang
wearing that tight silver wrap!
At a table nearby, he sat, inhaling
and exhaling smoke rings
eyes sparing not a minute
off that sweet southern bell.
yet keeping
not his desire tightly
under his cap, or his
dazzling red eyes off her
bell-shape bottom, and
salavating like pavlo's dog.
He grabs and held her tight!
Peeled off her shiny wrap-
completely exposing her milk
chocolate body.
Extending his trembling hands
to meet her offer, beads of moisture rising
like the morning dew, cooling his forehead.
The hard-eating chocoholic
grabbed silver-bell off the table,
tossed It into his waiting mouth,
circled it with his tongue, the
milk chocolate flowing down his chin
He smacked his lips in delight...:
"I'LL NEVER EAT ANOTHER CHOCOLATE KISS"
By
Almedia S. Knight or A.S.K
October 3,2006
(This poem was written at a writing workshop. A chocolate kiss was placed on the table as a prompt.)
You had me fooled right up to the end. Very good poem and excellent camouflage of the main theme of the poem Good Job.
O such a sweet! ! ! poem. What an imagination you have Almedia. So enjoyed this poem; D
really a sweet write with meaningful way..idea is rich and impressive
yes, i'll never have another chocolate kiss - why lure me when i'm at a disadvantage a great write indeed
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Yummy Yummy Smoothie Smoothie Symbolizing teeny bonnie ‘her milk -chocolate –body’ Enjoy slowly be not nervy ... ~ niv Thanks Ma’am for such a nice poem…wonderful metaphor…licked and lapped like savor… 10++ Ms. Nivedita UK