My Soul Taken Poem by Gavyn Krueger

My Soul Taken

Rating: 4.5


Do not look at me,
For I am dead.
I have grown white as the first winter's snow.
My soul is lifeless and I am merely a ghost.
I have no thoughts or feelings.
I have only but of certain actions.
I can not speak.
I can only look at the happy people, And know
That will never be me again.
I will never grow old.
I am lifeless, my soul taken.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Brianna Winebarger 27 October 2011

This is a really good poem. Honestly, I can't describe what I feel when I read it. But I just know it tears me apart and right now i want to cry. it made me feel depressed, but it spoke to me. I don't why, but this poem is one of the greatset i have ever read. therer is something abut it that captivates me, maybe it be the first few lines that captivates. thank you so much for writing it, i love it.

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Ency Bearis 26 October 2011

Nice one, such with strong desire and written well.

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Dave Walker 25 October 2011

Really like this. A really good poem. Great write.

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