My Spirit Poem by Abderrahmane Dakir

My Spirit

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My main issue is in my heart,
Nothing is exciting I felt,
Everything, any things at all I forget,

At first, I'm in urge to get,
What I want is the best.

After getting it as a gift,
I quickly lost its gist.

After giving all my list,
I find the recovery of my spirit.

My Spirit
Sunday, January 3, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: giving,soul,spirit
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 29 February 2016

Very well thought and written, Poignant poem. The greed in everyone of us keeps us going in the direction we never want to go...Thanks for sharing such a wonderful poem.10

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Abderrahmane Dakir 29 February 2016

Thank you Mr.Asim for writing this awesome comment for this poem.

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Mihaela Pirjol 05 January 2016

A saying comes to me while reading your poem: [ Giving is Receiving. ] The pleasure of giving (love, kindness, gifts) is far more endurable than receiving them.

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Abderrahmane Dakir 05 January 2016

Thank you for your awesome comment.

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Driss Ezzireg 03 January 2016

Very philosophical poem.Spiritual health is all what we need.Thanks Si Abderrahmane for your generosity in sharing.

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Abderrahmane Dakir 04 January 2016

I love so much your comment. Thank you so much.

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