Deep down but not dead
Buried but won't stop growing
In dirt but not dirt
Simply awesome. In dirt but not dirt. You truly have a broad vision. Truly inspirational words with a captivating title.
Sweet but brief.I ain't like reading such.Well that's nice.keep the ink flowing
Great! Lovely! Just the essence of the idea with no extra words!
according to 'Google': " down but not out (not comparable) (idiomatic) Temporarily incapacitated but not permanently defeated." So, there is STILL hope for ME? ? ! to MyPoemList and into May showcase. Thanks. bri :)
I liked how you used the lowly but important potato to put your message across. Symbolism is quite an art and you are quite adept at it. As well as the sharpness of brevity.10+
Truly inspirational. in dirt but not dirt' is how many of us find ourselves. When we realize that we are not the dirt, or of it, then growth in spirit, mind, and body is possible. A great poem. A 10.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I love this, it is deep and an inspired write we can learn from nature!