My Thoughts Poem by kat nomara

My Thoughts

Rating: 2.5


lost in the dark.
deep with in a tower where no light seems to reach.
I'm left with my thoughts,
wondering why we follow the same paths all leading to death.
every one dragging each other down.
i wish it to stop.
I stay there in the darkness of the tower,
keeping my wishes and pain to myself.
In what way could I change the world.
it has fallen so I stay.
listening to a whisper in the draft.
'there is light in the darkest place' i hear over and over.
i stay in the dark though for i see no light.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Poet Dragon 23 January 2008

In the deepest, in the darkest where the thoughts of pain are starkest... With the knowledge, with the terror and the thought that life's an error... Find a reason, find excuses for the right to all life's truces And in the darkest place of lies close your mind, open your eyes Nice poetry!

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