My View Poem by Osvaldo Govea

My View

Rating: 4.8


People say that love starts with a smile,
grows with a kiss, and ends with a tear.
But to me that is not quite clear.
To me love starts when your heart skips a beat
for that person, grows with a kiss, and when it ends.....
the thing is, it doesn't have to end.
It's a fact that hearts break and hearts mend.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tanya Stanford 26 August 2008

I am becoming a fan of your poems. Love the optimistic outlook on this one.

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Pat Diaz 06 June 2008

I like the part where you say the 'The heart mend' because its true it always mends, this is another beautiful poem.

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~ Jon London ~ 01 June 2008

Fantastic piece, , , , you really do have a remarkable gift....keep'm coming Ozzy mate....'10' regards Jon

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Endlessly Imperfect 07 May 2008

i love this piece! great use of words and i love that you are sharing your opinion on a topic you obviously feel strongly about through poetry, keep up the good work!

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