My Way To The Grave Poem by Alokendra MITRA

My Way To The Grave

Rating: 5.0


Like a meteor in the sky,
You came,
Flying right into my life,
And, out of it in no time.
Turning in moments,
Moments too brief,
My life, forever a celebration,
Into a dark shadow of grief.


But, missed, you shall not be,
My dear,
For, there burns in my self,
A flickering flame,
That keeps me sane,
And,
That makes this wreck exhale and inhale
As I dig my own grave,
With an epitaph that reads,
“ONE WHO LOVETH FOREVER”

Tuesday, November 10, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 23 January 2016

For, there burns in my self, A flickering flame, That keeps me sane, one who loves forever. what a lovely epitaph. thank you dear poet. you are sublime. tony

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A Juman 15 November 2015

Astonishing write my friend

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Alokendra Mitra 11 November 2015

This was written years ago, and the other one was written recently.

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Souren Mondal 12 November 2015

:) You used great use of the stanza though... With the following parts, both the poems have a similar yet very different meaning :)

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Souren Mondal 11 November 2015

'Like a meteor in the sky, You came, Flying right into my life, And, out of it in no time. Turning in moments, Moments too brief, My life, forever a celebration, Into a dark shadow of grief.' ___________________ 'Like a meteor in the sky, You came, Flying right into my life, And, out of it in no time. Turning in moments, Moments too brief, My life, forever a celebration, Into a dark shadow of grief.' Interesting... You used these identical stanzas, in this poem and your other poem 'Yours No More'.. But the following parts made the differences... Well thought out poems Alokendra.. You certainly have a talent to write about similar experiences from a different light and that is interesting.. Thank you for your poems.. Welcome to Poemhunter btw :)

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