lily montes

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My Words Of Wisdom For Those Of Loss


if loss is for times of grief and tears
then smiles are for times of happiness
but why not smile for sadness and happiness
for you know that once you have past it is nothing but happiness
and it should be for the ones of remembrance as well
the ones left behind here with others just beginning there lives get to keep the memories of the days when you were still around

Submitted: Sunday, September 18, 2011
Edited: Monday, September 19, 2011
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  • Rookie - 125 Points Romeo Della Valle (9/18/2011 5:08:00 PM)

    An amazing heart touching write that clearly shows your sensibility and perception of reality! I wrote one similar to yours when my father died this July 15Th passed! titled: TO MY DYING FATHER! Your excellent write has become your stepping stone to freely enter into the Poetry world! You are very welcome dear Lily! Give more of your talented writes to us and the rest of the World! God Bless You! , , , Romeo from NYC.... Que Dios te bendiga! (Report) Reply

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