My World Without You Poem by Adokshaja Madhav

My World Without You



My world without you is;
Like wealth without worth;
And health without happiness.

Everything around is changed;
A change immensely ominous;
Alarming aloud a terrible tragedy.

The Moon no more smiles;
The birds no more sing;
The flowers seem drooping all the time;
The tense seems stagnated forever.

Life is like a painting on canvas.
Still and still and still;
No movement and no merry.

Spirit stops twinkling;
Heart starts tearing;
Without You, My Love.

Saturday, January 5, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 05 January 2019

The Moon no more smiles; The birds no more sing; The flowers seem drooping all the time; The tense seems stagnated forever.......Without you my love............ love poem....... sense of loss. with fine examples that goes deep into the mind of the reader...........thank u dear poet. tony

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Adokshaja Madhav 05 January 2019

Thank u for writing sir...! Its really encouraging...!

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