Name Of My Confidante....... Poem by MAHTAB BANGALEE

Name Of My Confidante.......

Rating: 5.0


here
I've come
jobless stranger
as an alone wanderer

no darling here is
no confidante here is
no flower here is
no garden of making love here is
I find here
lonely I'm

then
the POET
an entity
from the primitive sense
calls me in whispering intuition

subconsciously I'm there is
find nothing without myself,
illusion! oversight on my sense!
is it an aberration?
o' nothing I know

it's not will-o-the-wisp of slut beauty,
not the Newton's Apple tree,
not the Buddha tree,
EUREKA! EUREKA! EUREKA!
screaming out I'm in lonely
but not in crazy
I find my darling beauty
in my living solitary
her name is - POETRY

-February 28,2019 Chattogram

Name Of My Confidante.......
Thursday, February 28, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: how i feel
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
From my comment on 1000 Th Poem When In Loneliness Think Of Me poem by me poet yeps poet
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 28 February 2019

no darling here is no confidante here is no flower here is no garden of making love here is I find here lonely I'm....the poets obsession of not having something he he deeply contemplates is amazingly expressed here! A beautiful poem...10

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M Asim Nehal 28 February 2019

Great comment, Roaming aimlessly and feeling lonely are two shores of the same river. May you find a suitable engagement of your liking, I pray to Almighty and still you have time to write your passion (Poetry) . Loved the way you wrote this poem.10++++

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Muzahidul Reza 10 March 2019

here I've come jobless stranger as an alone wanderer, ..... wow! well done

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Prabir Gayen 09 March 2019

it's not will-o-the-wisp of beauty, not the Newton's Apple tree, not the Buddha tree, EUREKA! EUREKA! EUREKA! screaming out I'm in lonely but not in crazy I find my darling beauty in my living solitary her name is - POETRY ..... beautiful

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Aniruddha Pathak 02 March 2019

Poetry is born from the womb of this world, no doubt, but the process of creating it needs some solitude, which I think is different from being lonely or alone. You have ended the poem beautifully.

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Valsa George 01 March 2019

When poetry comes to our life, we no longer will feel lonely or deserted. We are introduced into a larger world of fellow poets and we are able to commute to wonderlands of imagination! Boredom deserts us for ever! Mahtab, you have beautifully summarised the effect of poetry in our lives! Top marks

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Edward Kofi Louis 28 February 2019

'Lonely I'm'! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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