Need From A Boy, Girls (The 8 Things) Poem by Luwi Habte

Need From A Boy, Girls (The 8 Things)

Rating: 5.0


1
The smart one who looks after his way
Who never to be ashamed at what he say
He is the one to be hunted
Because he is smart minded

2
The one who is honest in his love
Who likes his wife most
The one who is proud by what he have
This one too, his love is safe

3
The one who is symphatic well
Who cares for every one at all
He is lovely, to be liked by all
He will win, his love will never fall

4
Some one who is quite funny
Who talks a little silently
And kidding quietly
That one will be liked by every lady

5
Some one who is clean through his dressing
Who is very attractive the way he walking
This is whom girl wishes to be her own
This is the one truth studied and being shown

6
Someone who is independent
And who never lost self confident
Quite lovely by each and every girl
He is the one who attack ladies heart’s cell

7
Who uses his mind silently
Who create things evidently
Who is the one to fall even for precious
This can be some thing serious

8
The one who is rich
This is mistake but he is lovely much
Some one rich in mind too
He is lovely too through the things he do

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
James Mclain 16 May 2009

It is this then through your mind of souls that you know what it is that you want..iip..most excellant verse from your purse..thank you..

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Carol Gall 17 May 2009

lovely verses you write very well

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Barbara Terry 17 May 2009

Okay where do I find this guy that is hard to find these days? You have written another fine poem giving women something to look forward to in a boyfriend, a lover, a mate. I want a guy with all of these attributes, as well as a strong physical body to protect me with, and hold me. Thank you sharing. A 10+++++. Love & hugs, Barbara

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Chad Foster 17 May 2009

this poem was really enjoyable. in the end i can actually picture someone. very well written.

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Tou Yang 17 May 2009

wow this poem was great... i feel like i need to be more like this person that you are describing...

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Vijay Gupta 29 May 2009

everyone wants the best. who will love the mediocre?

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Amir Amzah 28 May 2009

i like it from the start till the end.... the best line is line number 2... keep it up... kepp writing.

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a lovely beautiful poem..some how it is right and more can be added may be..10+++

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Maya Hershey 22 May 2009

very good, i liked it, a very impressive way of showing what a lady really wants! ! good job... peace.. Maya

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Daryl Young 22 May 2009

Well done young lady. An exellent poem. With a very good subject matter. I loved to read it. Rabbit

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