Neurotic By Nature Poem by Carol Nichols

Neurotic By Nature

Rating: 5.0


Tears secretly sting my eyes

A feeling of fear so intense

It's now consuming my body and mind

My chest is heavy, voice is pinched

Anxiety starts to burn a hole

Like a cigarette touching paper

An emotion that cannot be controlled

Making me neurotic by nature

Face tingling, my mind is racing

There's no reaction to the breaths I'm taking

Paying a debt I do not yet owe

Imprisoned in my own head

Put on a smile, don't let it show

That I want to scream but I laugh instead

Friday, September 9, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: anxiety
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mizzy ........ 12 September 2016

Excellent description...very intensely and honestly written!

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Carol Nichols 12 September 2016

Thank you very much.

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Saint Cynosure 01 October 2016

You got it...hahahah

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Julie Smith 30 December 2016

I can relate, love this :)

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Seamus O Brian 22 November 2016

This is an intense and raw depiction of the grip of anxiety. Very strong imagery here. Nicely done! NB

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Unnikrishnan E S 03 November 2016

Hi Carol, Tears.. sting my eyes... What an expression! Your words sting my bleeding heart.. I want to scream, but I laugh instead! Touching..100+

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James Mclain 02 November 2016

Like the proverbial elevator my bi polar sometimes is a swing that's up and down I have heard bird's sing.. iip

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Susan Lacovara 03 October 2016

The vice grip of anxiety, robbing the PEACE of mind. A horrible thief, indeed! How well you have described the angst!

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Carol Nichols 03 October 2016

Thank you! !

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