Romeo Della Valle

Rookie - 136 Points (Ageless / Dominican Republic)

Never Giving Up - Poem by Romeo Della Valle

Barely conscious
Or hardly caring which way
I face the World,
I take a bolder step,
Traveling steadily
Against the wind
That is sometimes too strong,
An air so cold
That it numbs my senses
Until I feel myself
Turned inside out…

II try to keep the direction
I have set for
So that somehow,
I will arrive somewhere
As I know the path
I have followed
Has brought me
To a better place,
A freer state of mind
Where I will truly
Become myself!


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Comments about Never Giving Up by Romeo Della Valle

  • Rookie - 251 Points Guy Lip-more (8/26/2012 4:48:00 PM)

    Very good poem sir, I sense almost what you were feeling, very inspiring poem. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 28 Points Ekaterina M. Polischuk (8/26/2012 1:37:00 PM)

    a very good idea of the poem)))) Never give up! ! ! and take care, you are a very good poet (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 322 Points Poetheart Morgan (8/24/2012 8:50:00 AM)

    I love changes.! It requires courage, audacity.And you have. Beautiful heart. Superbe! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Linda Moore (8/23/2012 1:10:00 AM)

    The path is always forward. And we must never give up.
    I like your thought so much. Positive thinking is going forward,
    Always forward ther is no other way: -) Wonderful (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, August 17, 2012

Poem Edited: Tuesday, October 30, 2012


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