Night Is Moving Towards Dawn Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Night Is Moving Towards Dawn

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Dreaming in love about dawn's cheek,
Slowly, slowly night has touched peak.

Speaking to someone, busy mobile call,
Who has thrown on leaves one light ball?

Mall is opened of dreams, sure visit we,
Sleep has started slipping in tune we see.

Tea cup will be brought up by branches,
Night is thinking to meet sun in ranches.

Night has fallen in love, lover is dawn,
Night is crawling more becoming fawn.

Leaves of trees are smiling large more,
Night is not bothered has opened door.

Love door is opened, night still cries,
Beam of light of God ties pure eyes.

© Kumarmani Mahakul,25 March 2017. All rights reserved.

Night Is Moving Towards Dawn
Saturday, March 25, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: dream,love,night,spiritual
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Cover photo © Kumarmani Mahakul,24 February 2017. All rights reserved.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 05 November 2022

A wonderful poem dear poet... well penned

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Dr Antony Theodore 25 January 2020

Love door is opened, night still cries, Beam of light of God ties pure eyes. great poem my dear Kumaramani. thank u for all your great comments. tony

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Mihaela Pirjol 11 December 2018

How beautifully this couplet poem unfolds through the night with whispers of joy and tranquility!

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Rebecca Navarre 26 March 2017

Wow! ! ! Magnificently And Wonderfully Done! ! ! ! ! What A Deeply Inspiring Song Sung! ! ! ! ! How Awesome! ! ! ! ! Thank You! ! ! ! ! So Much For Sharing This! ! ! ! ! Many Many 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++++

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Edward Kofi Louis 26 March 2017

Dawn's cheek! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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