Ninety Poem by Rachael Loudon

Ninety

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If I live to be ninety, I wonder what will be.
Will I look in the mirror and still see me?
Will I even remember who I used to be?

I bet those years went by fast,
Too fast to see.
Did I get to do all the things I dreamed of?
Did I let my loved ones know how much they mean to me?

Will I learn to appreciate the little things in life?
Like a pretty bird by the window, a smile from a stranger.
I bet all the holidays I took for granted seem so special these days.

If I do live to be ninety,
I hope life was good to me,
I hope I have grandkids that call and visit me.
I will tell them life is short,
and to do all you can.
Enjoy every moment,
be a simple man.

I will probably still be afraid of what is on the other side.
I will try not to show it, but be terrified inside.
When I breath my last breath,
I will finally get to see,
Something that only happens once,
but lasts for eternity.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khairul Ahsan 08 August 2013

This being your first poem in this forum, I take the privilege to welcome you cordially to PH.

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Khairul Ahsan 08 August 2013

A nice theme to write about. Very well written. When I breath my last breath, I will finally get to see, Something that only happens once, but lasts for eternity. The fear is contagious! A great emotion so well articulated!

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