No! Poem by Kiesha fields

No!

Rating: 5.0


Dont yel at me
Dont curse in my face
Stop making a scene!
You can't make me do anything i dont wanna do
You don't control my life
NO!
That is MY money. Those are my clothes
You can't treat me any type of way you want.
This is my house, not yours.
Just because you're stronger than me
Does'nt mean you can put your hands on me
NO!
You can't stomp over me like a rug
Who do you think you are?
You are not my dad. You are not my mom.
You are nobody, but a person
This has to end
NO!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Elenore Elizabeth 12 February 2008

good. your anger shows through and makes a beautiful poem

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MCKENZi : ] 12 February 2008

wow. sounds like you wrote this with anger built up.

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