No Longer Hiding Poem by Vanilla Thriller

No Longer Hiding

Rating: 5.0


A lost whisper blowing in the wind
Softly calling my name
Begging me to come closer
Surrounding me
Engulfing me
Pulling me nearer
Holding me tighter
The ground no longer
Beneath my feet
Floating in the air
Vaguely aware of who I am
My heartbeats
As numerous as the stars
Flying
Letting go
Of all
I think
Rational
Wishing to be swept
Away
With the
Breeze
Falling
Quickly
Dropped to the ground
Reality Crashes

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anthony Han 02 November 2011

Enjoyable poem, the first stanzas seem to set a moment of captivating emotion then moves on to a release of hope to relive that experience. +10 Also thanks for the read on 'Payback'.

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