No Name-06 Poem by Selena Star

No Name-06

Rating: 5.0


im sitting here,
not having a clue
'have no fear'
is what you tell me to do

a teardropp falls
and hits the ground
on the walls
all around

my head fills up,
with dizziness
like a lost pup
who can't express

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Landrey 09 October 2006

I REALLY like the second stanza, it's very powerful...great write, Star! ! I'll keep checkin' back. -landrey

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