Not Amazed Anymore Poem by Kul Rai

Not Amazed Anymore

Rating: 4.5


Don't bring your illusion hands,
Gazing sights for fun,
Don't poke this anonym pain…..

Unreal and false ……
….to …illusion me.
Bells of ever young cheers…
Fragrance, to ill victims.

Spying these sunless gloom.
Checking these silence.
Don't touch …
with such …
venomous lips,
Breathing your false breath.

I'm taking rest…
Let, me rest now.

Tuesday, October 27, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 29 October 2015

Love is a spiritual experience that affects all and sundry profoundly. It is however, whimsical and temperamental, appearing unannounced and may leave without warning if not carefully nurtured at all time to maintain its bliss. A good depiction of loss of fascination with love occasioned by insincerity. A well articulated piece of poetry, insightfully penned with conviction. Thanks for sharing Kul. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Kelly Kurt 27 October 2015

A very nicely written piece. I enjoyed. Thanks, Kul

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Edward Kofi Louis 27 October 2015

Nice work with the muse of your style.

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