Not Giving Up Poem by Sandra Feldman

Not Giving Up

Rating: 5.0


To Narrate,
Vacate,
Open the gate to,
Your soul, your feelings,
Your missing love,
In trembling sounds,
As life rebounds
From the past,
To future hope?
Palpitate, write,
Know you're alive,
Even if it's hard to cope,
When you're reaching,
The end of your rope.

Friday, November 18, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: optimism
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A poet's optimism is sometimes just a foot above pessimism.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Richard Wlodarski 18 November 2016

Poetry has saved me in more ways than one will ever know. I can totally relate to the optimistic spirit of this wonderful poem. Thank you, Sandra for your optimism and for sharing from your heart.

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Kim Barney 18 November 2016

This could have been written directly to me, as I have been thinking recently about leaving Poem Hunter. Thank you, my good friend.

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