Note To God Poem by Anonymous Daughter

Note To God

Rating: 4.5


My life has changed
no more wrong choices, the pain is over
Jesus has called onto me for far too long
and i'm now ready to answer him
the devil has ran my life for far too long
Jesus my master, my savior, I praise you
Tears will not again fall unknowlingly
They will fall and be tears of joy
i know where i am going
save my soul, be with me.
Sitting down by the church pew
wanting to give myself to you, but my feet being reluctant to move
one day with my hands raised to your glory
THERE IS A GOD
nobody can make me feel like this
lord please take away MY PAIN
TAKE ME. HELP ME
SAVE ME
my soul is tired of being lost, it needs a home
I feel so lost
but i can feel, better yet i know
that you're there

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Greenwolfe 1962 23 June 2008

I prefer to see this as a prayer than a note. I think God may see it the same way. It is a good note. The contents are familiar to everyone. That may be its drawback for a reader. Most readers want to read something they never read before. GW62

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