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9.5
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Uncountable black roses are smiling
smiling and smiling-I've seen
Is it fair or true, mare a dream or nightmare?
A lime-green joy is sleeping
on the dark-purple emotion
Keeping a nil distance between gardenia and bee!
Should I believe what is going on?
Should someone believe the invisible happenings?
Lunatic expression of fanaticism?
Nothing is occurring between the cotyledons
Neither a bud nor a leaf is waking up gently
beside the foot-path!
Ashraful Musaddeq
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Sunday, May 11, 2008 |
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Tuesday, August 19, 2008 |
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Comments about this poem (Nothing
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Shimon Weinroth (10/20/2008 12:38:00 AM)
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the botanists claim that though dormant and latent there is activity, I love your metaphors black roses smiling and lemon-green, my semantic attitude to the lexical term nothing is very different, ie, nothing, is forever or nothing is forever,
I am, nothing, therfore I am forever, the poem in a crux is symbolic and well done,10
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Joseph S. Josephides (9/20/2008 8:57:00 AM)
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Your poem is getting in the depthh of life. Seferis, the Nobel-awarded poet (1963) , in his original poems is using analogous icons (cotyledons) to express the complex meanings with simple means of the Nature.
Thanks for sharing, I give it a firm 10, dear Ashraful Musaddeq
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Existential Despair (9/19/2008 3:17:00 AM)
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A complex poem that is still lovely to read...thanks
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xxxxx xxxx (9/13/2008 1:41:00 PM)
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a diffirent poem takes me somewhere i love being around, thanks for ur verses
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