Nothing Say...Escape - (Cycle - Poetry For My Friends) Poem by Dagmara Anna AuraDagimar

Nothing Say...Escape - (Cycle - Poetry For My Friends)

Rating: 5.0


escape escape
somewhere on the end of the world
so that I can`t see you
so that I don`t get to know you

escape escape
let the breeze is wiping
you out of the strong wind
and unnecessary illusions

say nothing for loves
keep it secret about emotions
but blood is revolting
loneliness is plaguing

nice my you wanted with anger
to open my heart
did you think that it was
as straight as unlocking?

it is hurt therapy
will last longer whether
you can wait
without 'unnecessary' of words?

(for HN)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Maria Barbara Korynt 01 April 2009

Interesting idea. The hurt heart and the unpreparedness to new emotion. Topic realistic, known well - as old as the hills. All the more I am praising the way, into which you did it. Very interesting solution. Very good written. For me - pearl. I like it. :)

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