Dagmara Anna AuraDagimar

Rookie (06.08 1983 r. / Gdynia)

A Seaside Picture - Poem by Dagmara Anna AuraDagimar

a sunny weather
seagulls are flying so low
to the sea waves near
there is wet sand under feet
boy is building the castle

turret only stayed
is finishing it quickly
he is happy now
suddenly a bad surprise
and everything tumbled down

the same as the house
weak, because built from the cards
the dog is running
it is leaving only tracks
but it are transitory

our destroyed dreams
are a painful memory
it will often leave
permanent tracks on the heart
it is hard to remove them


Comments about A Seaside Picture by Dagmara Anna AuraDagimar

  • Rookie Afzal Shauq (7/31/2009 10:39:00 AM)

    the same as the house
    weak, because built from the cards
    the dog is running
    it is leaving only tracks
    but it are transitory

    what sweet melodic floe of poem is...thoughtful, meaningful and heart touhing one..wonderful..and really very impressive one..liekd it 10/10 (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 77 Points Surya . (7/30/2009 12:33:00 PM)

    a very nice poem.meaningful.last para is very good
    voted10
    surya (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 126 Points Leslie Alexis (heaven Is My Home) (7/23/2009 3:42:00 PM)

    you are a wise person.......... good poetry. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Maria Barbara Korynt (7/19/2009 4:46:00 PM)

    Very well written, insteresting poem. The last strophe is an excellent conclusuion. The realisation have the idea and the attempt very well. A knowledge of psychology and an ability are useful and observation too. Very much I like this poem. He isn't 'groaning' and a lot is telling the man, what is happening in the real life.Greetings. Maria Barbara Korynt (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, July 18, 2009

Poem Edited: Wednesday, September 2, 2009


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