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Shaan Sidhu

(21/5/1987 / India)

O So Lonely


O So Lonely
Are the days gone by.
When others enter your life
Then you push them by.

O So Lonely
When you were in control.
To love them or leave them
You were ever so bold.

O So Lonely
While you sit alone.
No one is there
To make your house a home.

O So Lonely
After all the hearts you break.
Did you ever think it was you
Who you'd really forsake?

O So Lonely
When life was just a dare.
You didn't take time to love
You didn't try to care.

O So Lonely
Have you learned the rule?
That its not just about you
But it does take two.

O So Lonely
Why sit and contemplate?
While others enjoy life
Its never too late.

Submitted: Saturday, December 29, 2007

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  • G M (3/1/2008 11:11:00 PM)

    Expresses a true understanding of the emotions (Report) Reply

  • Saroj Dhiman (12/29/2007 7:29:00 AM)

    very touching and true as life itself -well done,

    house cant be a home is the best line! (Report) Reply

  • Saroj Dhiman (12/29/2007 7:28:00 AM)

    very touching and true as life itself -well done,

    house cant be a home is the best line! (Report) Reply

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