Mention (in passing)
that I like tartan
& now
here you are
in a tiny tartan tank top
in a tiny tartan mini-skirt
matching tartan
(of course…of course)
bra & knickers
and underneath it all
(surprise…surprise)
tartan tit tassels.
I am...overwhelmed.
You look so
cute but
a bit
(over the top)
heavy on the overkill.
I remove each
tartan item
(delicately)
one
by
one.
Such
fun!
Tell you
I love you
just
as you
are.
Och aye but yes! Another hit on the miss in skirt. Seems like a companion piece to ON OTHER THINGS. Tender and funny all at the same time. You make loving...fun! love GinaXXX
Though their occurences may appear Spartan, ye canny beat a guid tart in Tartan. Danny; ¬)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Ahhh...but doncha just lovet the wee lassie for trying! Over the top but then you have the pleasure of taking off the top and the other delicious 'tartan items! ' Reducing her down to the lovely self you love her for. Didn't ya tell me that the next day you went out and got a kilt which she then delighted in and wouldn't let you take it off('cos she said it wasn't necessary) ! So dressing up and undresssing the dresssing can be a lot....of fun! So come on...write that poem as a follow up to this one and give us one of your sequence poems. And surely MIND ON OTHER THINGS is the bookend of this...is it not! Great Scot...it will be a hoot mon! Ahh...go on...go on go on! Ah ya will ya will ya will! Oh I love a lassie a lovely lovely lasssie...oh stop yer tickling Jock ya make me tear ma frock. I also like the rhymed couplet comment below! love Debbie the Debs