October Twelve Poem by Brenthley Adan

October Twelve

Rating: 4.5


Start a line of prose
to keep me and my sanity.

I have failed by guide, credo broken.
Facade of strength and confidence to build my wall.

The moon smiles at my misfortune.
Tomorrow, I shall try again.

Tuesday, October 13, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: pain
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 16 November 2015

Lovely inspirational piece of poetry, nicely encapsulated in poetic diction with conviction. Faith keeps those that keep the faith. I concur with your conclusion - Tomorrow is another day full of opportunities. Thanks for sharing Adan. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Fabrizio Frosini 13 October 2015

'' Tomorrow, I shall try again '' we need trying again each and every tomorrow.. That is what I do.. :) Thank you, Brenthley Blessings

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Kelly Kurt 13 October 2015

Well written and inspirational. Thanks, Brenthley

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Vishal Sharma 13 October 2015

this poetry is simply awesome..

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