Octopus Tentacles Our Love Poem by Mihaela Pirjol

Octopus Tentacles Our Love



when a tired sun

paints

its last rosy-orange nuances

upon the hopeless canvas of the sea

foreseeing

I feel how our love

sinks with it

for eternity—

octopus tentacles

clenching to my heart

the darkness of the night

tears our souls

apart

Monday, May 14, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: heartache,love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rini shibu 14 May 2018

Great lines..octopus tentacles which clench the heart into darkness

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Bipasha D 14 May 2018

The imagery blends beautifully with the theme of the poem.

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Robert Murray Smith 14 May 2018

I love the imagery in this poignant write. The death in night is eternity.++10

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Edward Kofi Louis 14 May 2018

'Clenching to my heart'! ! Facing the odds. Heartache! Love and pain. Thanks for sharing.

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