moon-bitten waves
eager to reciprocate
sea agitated
moonbeams piercing
through thick foliage
lighted jungle tracks
raindrops dancing on
green leaves, colourful petals
glow-worms at a feast!
i beg to differ with my worthy colleague....S_B Milton aint got nothin to do with this... :) be happy sat
The lines are wonderful for the scenic effect created through the device of personification...even a single speech-act can make a difference...you have attributed life n mind to Sea, Moon, n Rain...see what Milton does by this figure... . Earth felt the wound; and Nature, from her seat, sighing through all her works, gave signs of woe, That all was lost...
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
respected poet! i welcome your remarks, but taking it as a chance to explain my reason to mention the example from Milton...being a teacher, i think students use the site also, so of course if you see thematic connection is not my focus, rather the use of the figure of personification by milton is my concern...thanks :)